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seventeen syllable thoughts
are very helpful.
Eighteen or Sixteen
syllable thoughts won't do it.
They're a little off.
Ndinombethe.
seventeen syllable thoughts
are very helpful.
Eighteen or Sixteen
syllable thoughts won't do it.
They're a little off.
Ndinombethe.
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I'm not a user of this Haiku. Can we get it tempura fried?
Oh, isn't that the truth! Now, off to come up with my own 17 syllable thought for the day! :)
I blame my southern drawl on my syllable miscounts.
LOL @ Tara R. ..! I always lose count so I get frustrated and leave it to masters like LouCeeL..!
"Thinking needs be done,
Any syllables at all!"
Empty minds cry out.
:-)
Ha ha ha I am still overly impressed with your 100 word hiaku
This is great! I like Haiku, but more to read than to actually create. Not so great at that part, but I enjoy reading yours. :)
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