I still can't pull this whole thing together.
It's making me a little crazy.
I think one of my problems is that I haven't clearly defined the timeline. Of course, she started her journey in 1952 - but there was no mention of dates, at all, anywhere.
She comes to Vegas once a year, but the time of year is only hinted at - it is normally sometime when Jerry is out of school.
I think I need to go back and work a few things out - I may not make timelines any clearer in the story - but I think I have to get them clearer in my head.
I have to make things make sense - at least to me - so that things stay consistent.