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8/23/2008

Now I've done it

I worked on The Kid last evening. The story for this coming Thursday is done - maybe a tweak or two yet, but done for the most part. So I've started on the next one - Albuquerque - and things have kind of taken a turn. Suddenly we've taken a look at his very sordid past ... and it IS sordid. It is in dreams, again, but a little different in the form the dream takes - he sees the dream like a movie, he watches himself from outside the flow of the dream. It is going to be hard to read, I'm afraid. We'll see. It is rough right now, but the form is there, the direction is clear and the deeds are done. Ooooo, the deeds are done.

14 comments:

jientje said...

Hmmm, an interesting turn in the story? Can't wait! 5 I guess I'll have to? ) Why do we always want to be older than we are right now huh? ALWAYS LOOKING FORWARD TO THINGS?
Life does that to you,doesn't it, or is it you doing that to me?

warriorwoman said...

Lou, you are such a tease.
I see you are enjoying the writing, giving life to this person you created.
How much of you is in your story......?

moneythoughts said...

Have a good weekend, and I'll catch The Kid next week. What a great readership you have created. Well done.

Christy said...

If by sordid, you mean the penis makes its first appearance.....then bravo!

LOL

Joyce-Anne said...

I can't wait to read the next installment.

LceeL said...

Jientje: It's called "Gotcha".

warriorwoman: Well, in a past life ....

moneythoughts: Thank you, Fred.

Christy: Yup.

joyce-anne: Neither can I. It's like, I know where the rest of the story is going, and I thought I had it pretty well in mind, but even within the structure I have planned, in my head, there are, apparently, still going to be surprises in store for me.

Patsy said...

You do tease don't you. Foreplay seems to be, shall I say, forte. I await the -------- enough said. :)

Elizabeth said...

"Ooooo, the deeds are done."

Dirty deeds, done dirt cheap? ;)

Sorry, I couldn't resist! Can't wait to read it!

Hyphen Mama said...

My first thought was "You are such a tease!!" Then I see that WW already said that. She always takes the words right out of my brain. She's good like that.

But you're still a tease.

jientje said...

Hmmmm ... ;-)
*** raises her left eye-brow ***

Sandy C. said...

So like you, Lou. Always something up your sleeve ;) I kid. I kid.

LceeL said...

patsy: It's ALL foreplay, if you didn't know.

elizabeth: I LOVE that song!! I'll try to make it worth the wait.

hyphen mama: Yes, she is good that way.

jientje: All I get is an eyebrow?

Sandy C: Always, always, something up my sleeve.

Christy said...

Oh, man! That penis thing was a guess...are you kidding?

You know I'm a lonely housewife and might get worked up....

maggie's mind said...

Such a tease. ;)