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"I don't know what's appropriate."
"Honey, for two hundred bucks, anything you want is appropriate."
"But I've never done this before."
"Look, Honey, you just sit down on the bed, relax, and tell me what you want. We'll do all the stuff she won't do."
"No, it's not that. My wife ... died ... and ...."
"And you've been alone ever since. I'm sorry, Honey."
"Look, maybe this isn't such a good idea."
"It's up to you."
"It's just that I'm so nervous. I've never been with another woman."
"Don't be nervous. Turn out the lights and close your eyes ... and just pretend."
Ndinombethe.
19 comments:
mmmmmm, 100 nervous words exactly. well done dear lou!
Awwwww, good one.
Now, that's a different one :)
Good one :)
Whoa.
That's great advice all the way around... close your eyes and just pretend.
Damn! Steamy!
*snort*
just pretend..... I like it!
Wow. I didn't see that coming. A nervous situation indeed.
Wow! I got goosebumps reading that!
Great 100 words.
You've inspired me. My first 100 words will post tomorrow at 9 a.m. But I talk about a different type of nervous. :)
Cheers!
Well done. Almost made me start knawing on my cuticles.
Very thoughtful piece!
I like this - an interesting sort of nervous indeed.
I am glad that there is NOT a picture with this post.
Hmm? Was it Bud Abbott or "LOU" Costello that was a 'bad boy'?
Sex on the brain much? He,he!
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Very moving, and... I don't know, maybe a little sad.
Well, at least he paid $200 for it :)
Sooooo, great piece. My feelings on such matters are obviously complex, but it doesn't mean I can't still enjoy some good writing. :)
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