100 Word Challenge - Whatever

What follows is offered in response to Velvet Verbosity's 100 Word Challenge. The challenge, this week, is "Whatever".
No. really. It's the word "Whatever" - this is not some smartass teenager here, you know. Whatever.

Haiku Friday 

I' been followin' this jamoke for a week and I still cain't catch him at what he's up to.  His ole lady says he's been screwin' around with this floozey what works down at Silver's Saloon an' she axed me ta check it out, so I'm sittin' in this car from mornin' ta night an' I'm beginnin' ta think maybe this just ain't worth it.


All that floozey does is work, an' all he does is drink and he don' even drink at Silver's.  Top it off, I don' know how she's gonna pay me - cash?  Trade?





Tara R. said...

Your dialects are so spot on, totally authentic.

Bo said...

Tara's right. This is really well written. I enjoyed it.

Velvet Verbosity said...

Dangit, I thought I left a comment here. I hate when I "think" a comment, but don't WRITE the comment. Please tell me I'm not the only one.

Anyway, love when you write in these dialects. Seems to come natural for you! Must be fun to write too.