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Almost from the time they met, it had been a game with them. It had started at school. He said, "You have my pen." She turned around and handed it to him. "Yes, sorry." And then he said, "Oh, don't be sorry." And that was how they played the game. They'd walk along, and one would say, "You have my hand", "Yes, sorry", "Oh, don't be sorry". "You have my books", "Yes, sorry", "Oh, don't be sorry". "You have my heart", "Yes, sorry", "Oh, don't be sorry." Until one night she said, "You have my consent". And he just smiled.
Ndinombethe. :)
14 comments:
I'm smiling too. I like your fiction.
so...where do I post or link my 100 word challenge piece? and by when?
thanks, L
Lovely, as usual. I'm smiling too!
Quite romantic. I am happy for folks who get to have that kind of experience.
Very sweet and romantic.
Wonderful painted picture of love!
Paints a sweet picture...
This makes me smile, probably because it's the kind of running joke/conversation my husband and I do.
You always leave me smiling Lou.
And you never fail to amaze me at your ability to put so much into 100 words.
Very sweet :)
Oh this is so sweet. Just what I needed for my morning :)
How can I say anything new? The only right word to describe this is sweet. You made me smile and think "awww..."
I loved this. Amazing how you managed to put so much emotion and so many experiences into 100 words.
so so SWEET and romantic!
I love this!
Well done!
Mine is here
hugs
shakira
A lovely look into the private world of a couple, a world no one else gets to see.
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