"What I remember most about Momma is her lemonade. That tall, cool pitcher of the sweetest lemonade, on a hot summer's day ...."
"I remember, too. But she's dead now. I know it's unpleasant, but we've got to go through her house and get it ready to sell."
Two sisters. Grown and different women now. They went into the house with bags and boxes. To fill and take away. They emptied closets. And dresser drawers. They packed up room after room. For hot, sweaty hours.
"Last room. Kitchen."
They stepped into the kitchen.
Sitting on the counter, like all those years ago, was a tall pitcher of cold, sweet, lemonade.
Ndinombethe.
p.s. I'm not very happy with the photograph from yesterday - or at least the way it looks in the post. I am going to do some post-processing and fix it - and re-publish next week.
p.p.s. I really need to thank Loralee for this ps thing. It works great.
19 comments:
Nice one, Lou. I posted 100 words too. Can't seem to get more than that organized and written. I keep saying maybe tomorrow. I have ideas, I just don't write.
Not only a 100 word challenge but in the form of a ghost story too. Cool.
Speaking of which, will you re-publish the ghost story from last Halloween? Please.
I could write 100 words about how awesome the post script is. :)
Oh I LOVE the ghost story! You know I do!
what a story! still got goosebumps...
Perfection, Lou. Makes me long for some lemonade too ;)
xo
Your story about lemonade and death reminds me of Wallace Stevens and his poem about ice cream and death. Take a look at his poem "The Emperor of Ice Cream".
Well done.
Kinda creepy...:)
Oooo! A ghostly tale! I love it!
Ghostly lemonade! Creepy! And heartrendingly poignant. All in 100 words. Genius.
A mama never gives up caring for her children. ;)
I love the little surprises you always seem to build in at the end.
I love your writing.
Eerily splendid! Loved it! (Hugs)Indigo
Don't DRINK IT! Haunted lemonade!
I love the way your mind works, Lou.
Another great one, Lou!! Didn't see the ending coming. Love the spooky stuff! (she says as she is watching Ghosthunters)
Haha...very nice, Lou. I would've totally wrote a post about a lemonade stand.
I like this.
There's nothing like a tall glass of lemonade.
A sweet nostalgic piece.
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