Pictures of the galaxy
That feel familiar
Like I have been there
Old haunts, that I have been to
And will return to.
I know it is weird
But I am the universe
come to know itself.
I promised Nicole of NicoleB Photography I would publish a picture of my town. Here is our old train station - now moved to a new location near our new City Hall, which I will publish a picture of soon.
Ndinombethe.
17 comments:
A love a haiku that makes me think. Good stuff.
a familiar galaxy... that leaves the mind to wander. great haiku! and your old train station is beautiful!
Neat Pic
Neat Pic
You are an old Soul. And I'm not just saying that.
I love that trainstation picture. It's nice to see a little glimpse of your world.
Reading that, hmm, I felt it was autobiographical. Not for you, for me ;-). ~Mary
The old wooden train station reminds me of a few stories of my youth, but this is your train station not mine. But, I can't help but think, looking at that train station, if our leaders had been wise enough to know to hang in there with the trains, where we might be today?
I'm positive that I was sent to the wrong planet. It was a mistake. I cannot wait to get back home....where I was meant to be this whole time.
Still trying to figure
how the hell to write Haikus
that aren't sucky.
Yours are good examples on non- sucky haikus. Wish I could get in the habit.
"But I am the universe
come to know itself."
Brilliantly profound! (Hugs)Indigo
Lovely as always..
You always rock the 'ku, Lou!
Have a great weekend :)
Ashlie is right, Lou. You definitely rock the 'ku. I love the picture of the train station.
Love the train station! My son is so into trains right now, he would love it too.
Maggie's Mind: Thank you, Maggie.
Shadow: Thank you, too, Shadow.
Audubon Ron: Thanks, Ron.
Jientje: More glimpses coming in the next week or so.
FrankandMary: That's neat - that you can relate.
Moneythoughts: Now THERE is a thought.
Hyphen Mama: E.T., phone home ...
Loraine: Your Haikus aren't bad, Darlin'.
Indigo: Thank you, lovely Indigo.
Kim: Thank you, so much, Kim.
Ashlie: I will do that, Ashlie. You, as well.
Joyce-Anne: Thank you, Joyce-Anne.
HollyATOM: I'll take some pictures of my HO trains one of these days - just for him.
Beautiful Haiku!
And it fits so perfect :)
Picture is posted. Thanks to Jientje's reminder ;)
Lou, next year you gotta take us on a real city tour through your town :)
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