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8/08/2008

Haiku Friday and stuff

Haiku Friday



The third episode
published and out there for you
to read and enjoy.

The fourth episode
soon to be finally done
ready to enjoy.

The fifth episode
has not come to my mind yet
it lives in the fog.

unrealized dreams
have yet to come to his mind
to vex and torture.

but the final play
is in the planning stages
we know what is last.

you're gonna love it
his redemption is his death
that's the only hint.


This is more fun than looking at Tranny Head's bewbs. Which, as far as I'm concerned, give Lotus' RACK serious competition.

Anyway, I really want to thank everybody for the very kind and generous comments made regarding the last episode of 'The Kid'. You really make it easy to generate the enthusiasm necessary to keep it up. I mean, to keep on working on the story. But you knew that, right? Sure.

I've said it before, I'll say it again. I love you guys.

Peace.

23 comments:

maggie's mind said...

Ooh, a haiku about the story and that some more bits are already in progress, plus a juicy hint! Delish.

Elizabeth said...

"...it lives in the fog."
What a cool line!

When did it get to be Friday?

warriorwoman said...

you have my interest with 'his redemption is his death'

looking forward to the next piece Lou.

Shadow said...

gosh, you make haiku's seem so easy...

have a fab weekend!

Tranny Head said...

Sweet! My rack got a special shout out! Hooray!

Employee No. 3699 said...

Yeah for Fridays and Haiku's!

Lou, hope you have a simply wonderful weekend~

LceeL said...

maggies mind: Thank you. A teaser, if you will. I couldn't resist.

elizabeth: It's a cool line - but that's what it is between my ears - a fog. And in answer to your question - Around midnight last night.

warriorwoman: No fair reading my mind. And the next piece is 99% done.

Shadow: They only SEEM that way. And thanks, I will. Let's see... clean the upsrairs bathroom, weed the yard, mow the lawn .....

Tranny Head: Gotta love a woman that's proud to show off her RACK!!

LceeL said...

employee: And it's payday, too. And I will. Thanks.

Anglophile Football Fanatic said...

Hey Lou: as the official judge of the bewb off (and believe you me I saw the cleavage in the biggest zoom in possible) I hate to tell you, Tranny has nothing on Dawn. She won the button and everything.

Shadow said...

like you, i'm amazed yet love the fact, that no matter where you or i may be, we are able to visit, 'chat' and exchange idea, and 'meet' people we never would have. it's simply wonderful!!!!

the riddle? the answer is 'no' as in answer to the last line 'can you guess the riddle?'. apparently, 97% of harvard graduates got this wrong. 84% of pre-school kids got it right!!!! guess there's something to be said about childlike thinking.

have a fab weekend!

Secret Agent Mama said...

I love that line that Elizabeth loves, too!

Sincerely,
Freckles

Lady Language said...

I enjoyed the haiku too! I bet it makes blog365 a bit easier when you have the story to look forward too...or too much pressure? Anyways, keep it up...ummm, I mean keep writing the story :)

Maddy said...

I should really have a go at one of those, but it might tax my tiny brain too much. Well done you.
Cheers

moneythoughts said...

"his redemption is his death" This sounds very familiar. Am I getting warm? OK, I won't say another word, it is your story and you are the master story teller. Have a great weekend.

Sandy C. said...

Whoa! Leaving hints? On a Friday? The torture :)

I've told you this before, but I love how this is all unfolding. Very nicely haiku'd!

The Intracerebral Itinerary said...

I wish I could haiku. Something about the syllables drives me nuts though.

Holly at Tropic of Mom said...

You wouldn't tease your readers, would you?

Have a great weekend!

Eric S. said...

Great Haiku Lou. Very tantalizing to the readers who are patiently waiting for the next installment. Your going have us pulling our hair out by next Thursday.

I'll check your other next.

Myst_72 said...

'To vex and torture'

That's my favourite!

G
xx

witchypoo said...

The Kid has taken over your life. I love it.

Kelley said...

WHAT? I do a post about you and show you my bewbs and nothing...

Dude. I am heartbroken.

LceeL said...

AFF: DAWN? Ah, I don't know .....

shadow: Ah, the answer is "No." Story of my life.

Secret Agent Mama: You DO know that nobody is going to understand that, right?

Lady Language: Up, up and away ....

Maddy: You should do.

moneythoughts: No, you're not even close.

Sandy: Yes. A hint on a Friday. And it's LONG way 'til Thursday. Hee, Hee.

The intracerebral itinerary: You can to, haiku. All you need to do is count. And then you Haiku.

holly a.t.o.m.: You have a good weekend, too. Down there, by the beach.

Eric S.: Hee, Hee.

myst_72: Mine, too.

witchypoo: I hope I can get far enough ahead so I can stop and take some time to paint.

kelley: What ARE you talking about? I know i got up late this moring, and the pain pills have me groggy, but just what are you talking about? I looked. Your boobs ain't there.

Hyphen Mama said...

What a tangled web he weaves....