100 Word Challenge - against

What follows is in response to the 100 Word Challenge, authored by the fragrant Velvet Verbosity.

I love the feel of your skin, warm and soft, smooth and silky. I love the smell of your hair as I bury my face in the soft, warm crook of your neck and taste the goosebumps I find there with gentle licks and teasing nibbles. I love the feel of the long smoothness of your back under my hands, as I gently draw you to me by running my hands up between your shoulder blades and pressing your chest to mine. I love the way your thighs welcome me. With the pleasure, is the feel of you against me.


warriorwoman said...

I feel warm all over........and a sudden urge to take off all my clothes.

Velvet Verbosity said...

Dude, you didn't comment your link! Not that I mind, it's more for you than me.

Anyway, whew! Great piece. I can tell you're starting to have more fun with this challenge!

Sarah said...

Um...woah. Well I have the sudden urge to go dig out the erotica novel I reviewed a while back...or maybe jump my husband.

Wonderfully written!

Hyphen Mama said...

See what happens when she cleans the bathroom naked? Crazy things!

Sandy C. said...

*Fanning face with hand*


Well done Lou. Feeling a bit warm over here ;)

Elizabeth said...

Erm... anyone got a fan?

Alice said...

Perhaps you should be writing books along with your art. There's a serious market for stuff like you just wrote. ; ) I know, because I read it.

Renee Daniels aka Indygirl said...

Dayum. I think I'm a bit flushed.

Anonymous said...

Wow. I'm all hot & bothered and I didn't even just take a shower.

moneythoughts said...

There was once a guy that did the books for a company. He thought he could write better stuff than he was reading, so he wrote his own books. He died a little while ago. You may have heard of him. He changed his name to Harold Robbins.

If you got that many women commenting on those few words, think what you could do with a book.

I would like to be your driver at the book signings. :)


www.thegrandview.wordpress.com said...

Money Thoughts.....great line. I'll carry Lou's briefcase. That way I get to go inside.

secret agent mama said...


I don't visit you enough, and I hope you forgive me. I tend to be in my own world sometimes.

That said, you are one of my favorites. I hope you know this!

This piece? Made me BLUUUU-UUUUUSH!