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3/20/2008

100 Word Challenge #7 - Openings

You bless -
My Eyes - meant to see you, explore you, see the line of your hip, the swell of your breast, recognize danger and keep us safe.
My Ears - meant to hear you and know your voice, your laugh, the sweet sounds you make during love.
My Nostrils - meant to smell your pillow when I'm alone, so I feel close to you when I'm not.
My Mouth - with lips to kiss you where it hurts and tongue to taste you in times of intimacy, teeth to nibble those sensitive places you like being nibbled.
Your presence, it blesses my openings.

The above (not one of my best) in response to the 100 Word Challenge authored by Velvet Verbosity. Todays challenge word was 'Openings". I really had a lot of trouble with this one - I'm still not really happy with this effort but I'm running out of time. Besides, I'm behind on my packing.

4 comments:

Elizabeth said...

"My Mouth - with lips to kiss you where it hurts and tongue to taste you in times of intimacy, teeth to nibble those sensitive places you like being nibbled."

*fans self* Is it hot in here or is it just me??????

Sandy C. said...

Whew! My face began turning red at "My ears!"

That's quite a hot and heavy hundred!

Very nice ;)

Velvet Verbosity said...

You may not feel it was your best, but it was still pretty darned good!

secret agent mama said...

I absolutely love and connect to this.. You rock, Lou, my new, dear friend!