tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post2868316662495060674..comments2023-10-29T07:24:49.468-05:00Comments on LouCeeL: Two Years Earlier ...Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comBlogger23125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-76290107357437425172008-08-08T10:23:00.000-05:002008-08-08T10:23:00.000-05:00Wow, love this installment. I want to read more a...Wow, love this installment. I want to read more about whoever locked him in the closet (perhaps his mother?) And her issues and what he dealt with as a child. I'm hooked too and you are certainly a great writer. Thanks!Crimzen Creativehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04666225868450577918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-35248235521303124632008-08-07T23:11:00.000-05:002008-08-07T23:11:00.000-05:00Oh! Oh! Oh! I'm right there. Don't stop now!Okay. ...Oh! Oh! Oh! I'm right there. Don't stop now!<BR/><BR/>Okay. I'll wait.<BR/><BR/>Thursday. Next week. <BR/><BR/>I have this crazy idea that you'll paint the Kid and post his picture. With that hat.Hyphen Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10129843526632243730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-67297454141697363212008-08-07T21:58:00.000-05:002008-08-07T21:58:00.000-05:00OHmommy: Thank you. Character is what this thing...OHmommy: Thank you. Character is what this thing is all about. And this is the longest piece I have ever written. I never thought I would be able to sustain a character for this long.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-8554428975373801922008-08-07T21:52:00.000-05:002008-08-07T21:52:00.000-05:00moneythoughts: Are you kidding? Not only did I l...moneythoughts: Are you kidding? Not only did I listen to them when I was a kid, I have XM radio - I listen to both of them NOW. And I WILL finish this.<BR/><BR/>employee: I just finished about 95% of the next piece. I don't know if I'm going to be able to hold out until Thursday.<BR/><BR/>tash: I saw this comment earlier today and this is the first chance I've had to come back and reply. I'm glad I'm terrified, in a way. If I ever get to the point where I'm not, I'm afraid of what my attitude will be and what I would be willing to publish.<BR/><BR/>maggies mind: Thank you. More coming.<BR/><BR/>casdok: Thank you, ma'am. I hope it goes well with C.<BR/><BR/>redchair: Thank you, Vikki.<BR/><BR/>holly: And the reason is ....?<BR/><BR/>Christy: Thank you, Christy.<BR/><BR/>Sandy: And thank you, too. And for your help.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-31081432407030112462008-08-07T21:46:00.000-05:002008-08-07T21:46:00.000-05:00That was awesome. I really like your character de...That was awesome. I really like your character development.OHmommyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12712111068636100187noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-20483711439906937872008-08-07T20:50:00.000-05:002008-08-07T20:50:00.000-05:00LOVED this piece, Lou. Well done from start to fi...LOVED this piece, Lou. Well done from start to finish :) You really have a gift in developing these scenes and characters. <BR/><BR/>Side note- Blogger has been pissed at me all day! Not sure why, but it's eaten my comment about 4-5 times :( Perhaps it's my flaky internet.Momisodeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06752015177628948631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-27833846413419321182008-08-07T18:20:00.000-05:002008-08-07T18:20:00.000-05:00nice work, Lou!nice work, Lou!Christyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04974215579354036047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-81678121976171012492008-08-07T17:05:00.001-05:002008-08-07T17:05:00.001-05:00Well, of course I know the reason....Well, of course I know the reason....Hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03724228599717695914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-22836274046599534242008-08-07T17:05:00.000-05:002008-08-07T17:05:00.000-05:00You have the perfect writing style for this kind o...You have the perfect writing style for this kind of piece.<BR/><BR/>Reminds me of Road to Perdition for some reason....Hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03724228599717695914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-16698478093632348332008-08-07T14:48:00.000-05:002008-08-07T14:48:00.000-05:00Great work Lou!I was there.Great work Lou!<BR/><BR/>I was there.Alicehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02312731015432167519noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-65528806570769536602008-08-07T14:32:00.000-05:002008-08-07T14:32:00.000-05:00Outstanding Lou!!!!!!!!!!!!VikkiOutstanding Lou!!!!!!!!!!!!<BR/>VikkiVikki Northhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00843590983216729306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-40929604782753572632008-08-07T13:12:00.000-05:002008-08-07T13:12:00.000-05:00Wow, i see you have been busy writing! Super stuff...Wow, i see you have been busy writing! Super stuff!<BR/><BR/>C has just come home today for the weekend for his first visit since he moved :)Casdokhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03497897393162856190noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-15585032206197436632008-08-07T12:07:00.000-05:002008-08-07T12:07:00.000-05:00Beautifully done, once again! I love the thread of...Beautifully done, once again! I love the thread of confinement weaved throughout and the way you get inside The Kid's head. This piece was my favorite, maybe because I love characters even more than storylines themselves. I look forward to more installments!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-65832890041544682672008-08-07T10:33:00.000-05:002008-08-07T10:33:00.000-05:00And to think you were 'terrified' - terrified that...And to think you were 'terrified' - terrified that we wouldn't like THAT????!!!!!!!!<BR/><BR/>Another excellent piece. Oh my comments are becoming so repetitive - but I blame it on you because you keep flooring me with brilliant pieces. <BR/><BR/>Well done Lou!Ndinombethehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12532416207973445740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-21659200309879842162008-08-07T09:01:00.000-05:002008-08-07T09:01:00.000-05:00That dream sequence gave me the chills. Good work....That dream sequence gave me the chills. Good work.Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03686899164778195950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-221407693988414052008-08-07T08:26:00.000-05:002008-08-07T08:26:00.000-05:00Wow! That was great. I'll be at the edge of my s...Wow! That was great. I'll be at the edge of my seat waiting for you to turn the page for us to the next chapter.<BR/><BR/>It's kind of like we all cheated and read the last chapter first, hehe.Expat No. 3699https://www.blogger.com/profile/13023652840187420920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-39987262697113718202008-08-07T08:23:00.000-05:002008-08-07T08:23:00.000-05:00Very nice, I liked it a lot. And to think, you cou...Very nice, I liked it a lot. <BR/><BR/>And to think, you could be a writer. A very good writer.<BR/><BR/>This reminds me of listening to the radio when I was a little boy before we had a TV. Did you listen to the Lone Ranger or Sgt. Preston on the radio? That is what these installments remind me of.<BR/><BR/>Hope you will have time to finish the story down the road, I'm hooked.moneythoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08462893426608294171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-28650028753592766112008-08-07T08:18:00.000-05:002008-08-07T08:18:00.000-05:00warriorwoman: Thanks. Thank you very much. And yes...warriorwoman: Thanks. Thank you very much. And yes, one episode needs to lead to the next - and next he flies to Kansas City.<BR/><BR/>eric: Thank you, too. 'Keep going'. I guess I'm committed. But I'm going to have to learn a bit about sociopathology - and quick.<BR/><BR/>witchypoo: I'm so glad you find this as 'candy'. That's so ... cool. Have a nice trip. The Kid will be back next Thursday. Or sooner.<BR/><BR/>Mike: So far it's next Thursday. But it could be sooner. I don't know yet.<BR/><BR/>Shadow: Thank you, ma'am. That's high praise from someone who writes as well as you do.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-84203597560833844732008-08-07T07:59:00.000-05:002008-08-07T07:59:00.000-05:00you MAY tell a story. lovely stuff!!!you MAY tell a story. lovely stuff!!!Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-32653575138534167732008-08-07T07:58:00.000-05:002008-08-07T07:58:00.000-05:00Can't wait for the next installment.Can't wait for the next installment.www.ayewonder.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00117421315746830053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-37073900003538902008-08-07T06:34:00.000-05:002008-08-07T06:34:00.000-05:00I'm glad I checked in just before leaving town to ...I'm glad I checked in just before leaving town to scoop up this brain candy. Well done!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-90506888733873867472008-08-07T01:51:00.000-05:002008-08-07T01:51:00.000-05:00You wove that one together perfect. I like the wa...You wove that one together perfect. I like the way you set up the prelude to the dream, it seemed to fit some pieces together. You made the right choice, and created yet another intriguing tale. Keep going, and let us see the reasons why he is the way he is.Eric S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13214969358950690069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-61127440526139619662008-08-07T00:24:00.000-05:002008-08-07T00:24:00.000-05:00Lou - that was good.That was really really good.Yo...Lou - that was good.<BR/><BR/>That was really really good.<BR/><BR/>You can really write, I'm so happy to read your stuff. <BR/>Nice ending. Feels like it sets the tone for the next installation. <BR/>I like the way you write the Kid's thoughts, in that choppy kind of way. I feel what it's like to be the Kid. <BR/><BR/>Nice work Lou.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com