tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post6191522076029702016..comments2023-10-29T07:24:49.468-05:00Comments on LouCeeL: 100 Word Challenge - Road Trip Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-91403098455309482052012-09-01T01:46:02.381-05:002012-09-01T01:46:02.381-05:00beautiful - and I love the term "jenny" ...beautiful - and I love the term "jenny" for a car. Just one step up from a jenny mule. <br /><br />sweet piece, LouPurpleMoosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05593657030942243283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-57106881727761431002012-08-31T16:17:20.419-05:002012-08-31T16:17:20.419-05:00What a great kernel to start a larger story. Thos...What a great kernel to start a larger story. Those are the best kinds of prompts! Nice job.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-69113903886814926562012-08-30T21:43:37.710-05:002012-08-30T21:43:37.710-05:00journey of a lifetime :) Nicely donejourney of a lifetime :) Nicely doneCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-69141855565936174932012-08-30T18:25:10.954-05:002012-08-30T18:25:10.954-05:00Thats going to be an amazing journey. How bitters...Thats going to be an amazing journey. How bittersweet!Bohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05985370927609164513noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-27121286919646711722012-08-30T15:27:21.516-05:002012-08-30T15:27:21.516-05:00Nice. Great tone. :-) I found the formatting a bit...Nice. Great tone. :-) I found the formatting a bit confusing though: is there some reason the buyer is in plain text and the seller is emboldened? I usually save stuff like that for when the method of communication is unusual, like telepathy or something. Agincourtdbhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00727155620856112847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-24765958833892364822012-08-30T10:49:47.255-05:002012-08-30T10:49:47.255-05:00Oh yes, it is the JOURNEY that matters. Go the dis...Oh yes, it is the JOURNEY that matters. Go the distance! A great take on the prompt and I love LOVE your accents. LOL<br />hugs<br />shakiraAnonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10264352891639027269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-63606083986328436932012-08-30T10:17:53.251-05:002012-08-30T10:17:53.251-05:00Oh, sad one. You could take this farther into the ...Oh, sad one. You could take this farther into the story.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-56636640769874132432012-08-30T08:16:28.568-05:002012-08-30T08:16:28.568-05:00Oh, so bittersweet. I hope they made it to Califor...Oh, so bittersweet. I hope they made it to California. Your dialect dialog flows so well, and is very believable. Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-403764887208135432012-08-30T05:28:04.140-05:002012-08-30T05:28:04.140-05:00You are right... this was melancholy... and it all...You are right... this was melancholy... and it all hit in the last line... good writing... pulled me in and then dropped an unexpected plot change that affected the way I interpreted the entire piece...Big Mark 243https://www.blogger.com/profile/10974573439218884164noreply@blogger.com