tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post5943189973028866874..comments2023-10-29T07:24:49.468-05:00Comments on LouCeeL: Earlier That Evening ....Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-47052610589440084932008-08-01T12:15:00.000-05:002008-08-01T12:15:00.000-05:00Did you have this in mind before you wrote the fir...Did you have this in mind before you wrote the first post and you left it unsaid? Or did it come to you after the first? Are there more chapters that preclude these that are brewing in your brain?Hyphen Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10129843526632243730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-86248188975619788752008-08-01T08:46:00.000-05:002008-08-01T08:46:00.000-05:00How did I miss this?!?! Ugh, my reader is all sort...How did I miss this?!?! Ugh, my reader is all sorts of wacky. I think we need to break up again. <BR/><BR/>I really enjoyed this piece, Lou. Your writing totally has me all creeped out. LOVE it ;)Momisodeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06752015177628948631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-64876668476291737622008-07-31T20:57:00.000-05:002008-07-31T20:57:00.000-05:00Hi Lou,Wonderful set-up to the dastardly deed! The...Hi Lou,<BR/>Wonderful set-up to the dastardly deed! The Kid’s a thug for sure and gets exactly what coming to him. <BR/><BR/>I wanted to mention that Eric is starting a collaborative writing project that you might enjoy participating in also. <BR/>This is the link:<BR/>http://smalltownmountainboy.blogspot.com/2008/07/possibilities.html<BR/><BR/>Keep those creative juices flowing, Lou. Great stuff.<BR/>VikkiVikki Northhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00843590983216729306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-6269087929210010422008-07-31T19:22:00.000-05:002008-07-31T19:22:00.000-05:00Hyy Lou, well done. Maybe the RAT could end up bei...Hyy Lou, well done. Maybe the RAT could end up being main character and wiping them all out one by one. Oh if Kid had only heeded the warning.... Hope your creative writing continues on your site now - it would be a great addition to your blog!!!Lillyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14597193176450931002noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-76442760747370386952008-07-31T19:17:00.000-05:002008-07-31T19:17:00.000-05:00ha ha, loved it Lou.I like how you make a little r...ha ha, loved it Lou.<BR/><BR/>I like how you make a little rat the distraction that ironically foreshadows the outcome. <BR/><BR/>(I hope I used the right words there, or at least that you get my meaning)<BR/><BR/>Thank you for writing that, it was a good read.<BR/>And saying that 'it was a good read', I mean, it flowed, it was easy on the eyes and the brain, and quite enjoyable. <BR/><BR/>Lou, you are such a writer.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-22801062785574731522008-07-31T15:08:00.000-05:002008-07-31T15:08:00.000-05:00Ooh, a seedy mob story! I'm with maggies, that las...Ooh, a seedy mob story! I'm with maggies, that last line is perfect!Hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03724228599717695914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-73552240574848444652008-07-31T14:50:00.000-05:002008-07-31T14:50:00.000-05:00Nicely done, good tempo, definitely could make a g...Nicely done, good tempo, definitely could make a great story.moneythoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08462893426608294171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-31408441494171957902008-07-31T11:47:00.000-05:002008-07-31T11:47:00.000-05:00Aggggghhhh, that last line!! This is some good wri...Aggggghhhh, that last line!! This is some good writing, and I love that you went further back, even if I am all creeped out with rats on my brain.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-674883536511925502008-07-31T10:37:00.000-05:002008-07-31T10:37:00.000-05:00Mike: Yes, he is. The glue, so to speak.Eric S.:...Mike: Yes, he is. The glue, so to speak.<BR/><BR/>Eric S.: I'm thinking about it.<BR/><BR/>Shadow: I hope you are well - or at least better.<BR/><BR/>Tash: Looking forward to yours.<BR/><BR/>Employee: I AM thinking in those terms. But the story would be fairly dark, given where it ends up and all. Would you guys want to go through that every Thursday?Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-44075918690252115262008-07-31T10:29:00.000-05:002008-07-31T10:29:00.000-05:00Like eric s. said, take us back further. Write th...Like eric s. said, take us back further. Write the story from end to beginning!<BR/><BR/>I read a book years ago by an english author that did that. A couple was murdered and as he worked the story forward about how their bodies were decaying, he worked it back. How they came to be killed, and then back decades to how they had met, etc. I wish I could remember the title or author because I would love to read it again.Expat No. 3699https://www.blogger.com/profile/13023652840187420920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-83046693460265321912008-07-31T09:49:00.000-05:002008-07-31T09:49:00.000-05:00Brilliance - again! Hoping to find some time this ...Brilliance - again! Hoping to find some time this weekend to come up with a short piece myself. Oh please let the creative juices flow!Ndinombethehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12532416207973445740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-89965457068738670972008-07-31T09:07:00.000-05:002008-07-31T09:07:00.000-05:00a quick 'hey' as instructed... i'm home, a bit wob...a quick 'hey' as instructed... i'm home, a bit wobbly but on the mend! will catch up and post soon, the weekend's looming after all! yayShadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-11751165332555416052008-07-31T08:07:00.000-05:002008-07-31T08:07:00.000-05:00Lou, You have a way with word's indeed. This is a ...Lou, You have a way with word's indeed. This is a fun add to your character. You should take us back farther.Eric S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13214969358950690069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-54863917906145269662008-07-31T02:48:00.000-05:002008-07-31T02:48:00.000-05:00HA HA...the rat is back!HA HA...the rat is back!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com