tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post4382557281524443017..comments2023-10-29T07:24:49.468-05:00Comments on LouCeeL: Kecharitomene - ConclusionAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comBlogger16125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-56605433426288228872009-05-16T16:19:00.000-05:002009-05-16T16:19:00.000-05:00Every word you write is a gift. Thank you so much ...Every word you write is a gift. Thank you so much for sharing with us.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-34316788916655393142009-05-15T21:14:00.000-05:002009-05-15T21:14:00.000-05:00Oh mah holy hell. And I don't think that phrase h...Oh mah holy hell. And I don't think that phrase has ever been more appropriate.<br /><br />XXReehttp://hotfessional.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-44288777836106205202009-05-15T08:57:00.000-05:002009-05-15T08:57:00.000-05:00I agree with whoever said that we see so much abus...I agree with whoever said that we see so much abuse coming to light, that it's difficult to see the side that some of these accusations could be false.<br /><br />Very well done.Hyphen Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10129843526632243730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-6325240811529682382009-05-14T21:13:00.000-05:002009-05-14T21:13:00.000-05:00Wow. That was an unexpected twist. Tragic, but ve...Wow. That was an unexpected twist. Tragic, but very well told. You have a way of keeping us hanging on every word.Momisodeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06752015177628948631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-45774735355336227902009-05-14T13:41:00.000-05:002009-05-14T13:41:00.000-05:00As it is, I love the conclusion. It definitely ha...As it is, I love the conclusion. It definitely has a twist, and that has to be one of my favorite literary devices. If you do choose to re-write it, I hope you'll share that one with us too!Sarah @ BecomingSarah.comhttp://www.becomingsarah.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-83117945899526055742009-05-14T11:44:00.000-05:002009-05-14T11:44:00.000-05:00I like it - but if a re write is in order in your ...I like it - but if a re write is in order in your mind then do it - I find that re-writing refines the pieces I work on and while its difficult and sometimes frustrating it sure can be worth it when you feel complete at the end!Wait. What?https://www.blogger.com/profile/16914656489970904052noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-40118585673809697052009-05-14T11:19:00.000-05:002009-05-14T11:19:00.000-05:00Wow.
Please tell me that after the young man stor...Wow.<br /><br />Please tell me that after the young man stormed out of the office he got hit by a car.<br /><br />Oops, did I just type that out loud?Expat No. 3699https://www.blogger.com/profile/13023652840187420920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-46198559754952197122009-05-14T09:52:00.000-05:002009-05-14T09:52:00.000-05:00In light of all the accusations that have come and...In light of all the accusations that have come and gone among the churches...one must wonder how easily mistakes could of been made condemning a man. We strive to do the right thing, sometimes our minds don't allow for the truth to be heard. (Hugs)IndigoSage Ravenwoodhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17143502548162174269noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-64260577603552157092009-05-14T09:49:00.000-05:002009-05-14T09:49:00.000-05:00Joyce-Anne: Thank you, Joyce-Anne. But sometimes...Joyce-Anne: Thank you, Joyce-Anne. But sometimes I think I don't explain enough when I write - and people miss things or don't understand.<br /><br />Patsy: The lie was confessed to him. by the liar, tying his hands. A priest cannot EVER reveal what is told to him in the Confessional.<br /><br />Loraine: Thank you, Loraine. A twist, yes, but a cautionary tale about jumping to conclusions, after all.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-12606889527341087482009-05-14T09:37:00.000-05:002009-05-14T09:37:00.000-05:00Definitely a twist to that tale! Sad... very well ...Definitely a twist to that tale! Sad... very well written and thoughtful.Lorainehttp://www.artofseeking.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-74177887823407205372009-05-14T09:34:00.000-05:002009-05-14T09:34:00.000-05:00Wow -- didn't see that coming. I wonder why he di...Wow -- didn't see that coming. I wonder why he didn't defend himself, what about the young man kept him (the priest) quiet, let his own life be ruined? <br /><br />After writing that I went back and read comments -- I see you are wondering the same things. Your stories always leave room for more -- leave the reader (and evidently the writer) wanting more.Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14800220805290554359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-90332656174941740512009-05-14T08:49:00.000-05:002009-05-14T08:49:00.000-05:00That was very well written. I know you feel it's i...That was very well written. I know you feel it's incomplete, but I enjoyed the story.Joyce-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05833330034225455578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-17209060157524300332009-05-14T07:33:00.000-05:002009-05-14T07:33:00.000-05:00Jientje: Thank you, Jientje. But I am not happy ...Jientje: Thank you, Jientje. But I am not happy with the "Conclusion". It feels incomplete to me. I may have to rewrite it.<br /><br />Shadow: Thank you, Shadow. But I need a better grip on the back half of the story.<br /><br />Nicole: Thank you, Nicole. Yes. Tough. And tougher still because I didn't get it right. Not yet.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-28151476037388911632009-05-14T04:29:00.000-05:002009-05-14T04:29:00.000-05:00Whow,..., a tough one.Whow,..., a tough one.Nicolehttp://nicoleb.orgnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-47824848551840599812009-05-14T04:25:00.000-05:002009-05-14T04:25:00.000-05:00how sad... your writing is gripping though!how sad... your writing is gripping though!Shadowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05999801833389058410noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-80386572427632511822009-05-14T00:13:00.000-05:002009-05-14T00:13:00.000-05:00I love how you write. Every word of it.I love how you write. Every word of it.Jientjehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14133675047491618720noreply@blogger.com