tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post3250461551915170944..comments2023-10-29T07:24:49.468-05:00Comments on LouCeeL: Vegas - The Kid - Part 8Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comBlogger28125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-32301014514295630632008-09-13T09:16:00.000-05:002008-09-13T09:16:00.000-05:00Steamy! Any woman who is a fan of romance novels ...Steamy! Any woman who is a fan of romance novels need not buy another Daniel Steele...go Lou!Crimzen Creativehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04666225868450577918noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-79539373590981734862008-09-13T09:09:00.000-05:002008-09-13T09:09:00.000-05:00*fans self*Wow... it's hot in here!!!!! Is it jus...*fans self*<BR/>Wow... it's hot in here!!!!! Is it just me????Elizabethhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03686899164778195950noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-16660055412727477342008-09-12T21:49:00.000-05:002008-09-12T21:49:00.000-05:00I'm sorry I was late, what a post! I think you di...I'm sorry I was late, what a post! I think you did this chapter perfectly, not too much but not too little. I just wish I could manage such balance in my stories. I didn't even take a sneak peak. <BR/><BR/>I can tell you are feeling this story again, and not worrying about the writing as much. It's better that way. I couldn't do it, I'm no where near good enough. Keep up the quality story telling.Eric S.https://www.blogger.com/profile/13214969358950690069noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-87650944202381526542008-09-12T14:31:00.000-05:002008-09-12T14:31:00.000-05:00A mile-high club story!A mile-high club story!Hollyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03724228599717695914noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-45945929262607771742008-09-12T08:27:00.000-05:002008-09-12T08:27:00.000-05:00That's it...sigh.....after the book I read last ni...That's it...sigh.....after the book I read last night,....man,....I don't know if I can sleep tonight... but hey, hubby's still at home :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-59560351175704150632008-09-12T07:11:00.000-05:002008-09-12T07:11:00.000-05:00myst_72: Yes. The Theater of the Mind. Where ea...myst_72: Yes. The Theater of the Mind. Where each person gets to construct their own vision of what is going on.<BR/><BR/>patsy: 5'2"? vs 6'3"? Hmmmm. Okay, leaving lalaland now ... If that were an issue here, I just would have had her climb up on the suitcases.<BR/><BR/>warriorwoman: Thank you, ma'am. Thanks to you.<BR/><BR/>christy: The initial idea was to make him totally despicable - but that didn't work out. I'm glad it didn't.<BR/><BR/>redchair: Thank you, Vikki. You were right.<BR/><BR/>Hyphen Mama: Thank you. I love leaving a lady speechless. (heh, heh) That said, we've still got several episodes left to go. End of October, maybe.<BR/><BR/>Maggies Mind: Thank you Maggie. 9/11 was on my mind, too - but I've been so busy and it snuck up on me so fast, I didn't really think it would be right to pull the episode so late in the game.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-63746292219874595162008-09-11T23:25:00.000-05:002008-09-11T23:25:00.000-05:00Yours is the only post I read today that wasn't a ...Yours is the only post I read today that wasn't a 9/11 post (just how I am), but I just had to visit The Kid, and I was not disappointed. There was so much to love about this episode - the hair thing, the first time facing someone thing, the blue eyes. Delicious.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-85952176732541574742008-09-11T21:02:00.000-05:002008-09-11T21:02:00.000-05:00I'm late to the party. I knew I couldn't read it w...I'm late to the party. I knew I couldn't read it while rug-rats were running amok. <BR/><BR/>Well done! I'm almost speechless. Now I'm trying to figure out how much longer The Kid is gonna hang on.Hyphen Mamahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10129843526632243730noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-46574438636539374142008-09-11T20:31:00.000-05:002008-09-11T20:31:00.000-05:00I told you they'd love this one. Great segment, Lo...I told you they'd love this one. Great segment, Lou.<BR/>VikkiVikki Northhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00843590983216729306noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-37186546602930929602008-09-11T19:49:00.000-05:002008-09-11T19:49:00.000-05:00I feel sorry for this abused child.I knew a guy--m...I feel sorry for this abused child.<BR/><BR/>I knew a guy--maybe biblically, I won't say--that had been abused and he always wanted to do it from behind.<BR/><BR/>Those tears. <BR/><BR/>Now I hate knowing what I know will happen.....<BR/><BR/>Maybe there's a baby, though....stranger things have happened.Christyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04974215579354036047noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-78026069736210583912008-09-11T19:41:00.000-05:002008-09-11T19:41:00.000-05:00Lou, you give me too much credit, but thank you.I ...Lou, you give me too much credit, but thank you.<BR/><BR/>I liked this segment of the story, it showed more guts and attitude from The Kid.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-87419891528355448482008-09-11T19:14:00.000-05:002008-09-11T19:14:00.000-05:00Just right --- the whole scene -- just right! You...Just right --- the whole scene -- just right! You do handle these things so well, but I always have to grin about sex scenes where the couples are standing up --- see I'm 5'2" married to a 6'3" guy -- see why I grin?Patsyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14800220805290554359noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-35263638895199346012008-09-11T19:01:00.000-05:002008-09-11T19:01:00.000-05:00No, you weren't explicit but you have written it i...No, you weren't explicit but you have written it in such a way that invokes much imagery!<BR/><BR/>So the juiciness must be in my head - makes sense! He He!<BR/><BR/>G<BR/>xxxMyst_72https://www.blogger.com/profile/01670435027908994101noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-10857683992366805682008-09-11T15:16:00.000-05:002008-09-11T15:16:00.000-05:00jientje: I am so glad you liked it.shadow: When ...jientje: I am so glad you liked it.<BR/><BR/>shadow: When you figure that out, let me know, and then I'll try it on and see what happens.<BR/><BR/>myst_72: Juicy? I wasn't THAT explicit!<BR/><BR/>moneythoughts: Thanks, Fred. I hear it - but I wrote it. I'm glad someone else can, as well.<BR/><BR/>joyce-anne: This may be the only time in my life when it's actually been okay to leave a woman wanting more and more.<BR/><BR/>veronica: I am, truly, overwhelmed. Thank you, Veronica.<BR/><BR/>employee: Thank you. It's getting harder and harder to live up to expectations. And NO, that's not any kind of sexual reference.<BR/><BR/>Sanday C: I thought about making that scene longer - more detailed. But I couldn't do it without making it 'dirty' and that's not what this is all about.<BR/><BR/>Jennifer: Nap time! girls. And my mind go twinning off in a lovely direction ... thank you. I needed that.<BR/><BR/>witchypoo: Thank you, ma'am. <BR/><BR/>Honeybell: Thank you, honeybell. Warm?<BR/><BR/>Tash: I'm working on next week, even as we speak. For the first time, I am actually NOT two weeks ahead.<BR/><BR/>Ayewonder: Thank you Mike. As noted above, I couldn't write the sex scene any other way without going into graphic detail. And that's not what this is about. Besides, if I was going to go that route, I'd have to do a LOT more research.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-80398825364491766362008-09-11T13:45:00.000-05:002008-09-11T13:45:00.000-05:00Lou,I thought your treatment of the sex scene was ...Lou,<BR/>I thought your treatment of the sex scene was perfect. It could have easily been gratuitous but it wasn't at all. It helped develop the Kid's personna. Maybe the best writing yet.www.ayewonder.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00117421315746830053noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-25377684943965702262008-09-11T12:35:00.000-05:002008-09-11T12:35:00.000-05:00Brilliant Lou, as ever! Finally got caught up and ...Brilliant Lou, as ever! Finally got caught up and loving every minute of it! <BR/><BR/>Can't wait to see where he goes from here!Ndinombethehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12532416207973445740noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-68996693848000703732008-09-11T12:01:00.000-05:002008-09-11T12:01:00.000-05:00Goodness gracious me!This was fantastic Lou, truly...Goodness gracious me!<BR/><BR/>This was fantastic Lou, truly.Honeybellhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06448242064198643614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-46330263918609569672008-09-11T11:55:00.000-05:002008-09-11T11:55:00.000-05:00The issues with hair part was just creepy enough. ...The issues with hair part was just creepy enough. Whew. You, suh, can write!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-28503959922301660912008-09-11T11:24:00.000-05:002008-09-11T11:24:00.000-05:00okay Lou... here I am. :) lol I didn't get to read...okay Lou... here I am. :) lol I didn't get to read your post... I was checking emails to see if I had heard from the mortgage broker or real estate agent... neither, but I was so happy to see a comment from you. :) <BR/>you sure do know how to make me feel loved!! :) i'm sorry i have been so absent lately... I do sincerly miss your blog and your stories. :) i will try to catch up some while the girls nap today... and by "girls" i do mean my twins and and the the "girls" or "twins" like lotus' bewbs!! lol just incase the DOM was thinking that. :) lol <BR/><BR/>i will also try to leave another lengthy comment for you when I come back. plus there is always this weekend... i think i will be just sitting at home... so ci an always do something fun like come read your stories. actually that is a good plan!! :)<BR/><BR/>thanks for all the LOVE!! :)<BR/><BR/>xoxoxoxJenniferhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14273782359824312027noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-74725953104225678472008-09-11T11:16:00.000-05:002008-09-11T11:16:00.000-05:00I agree with Shadow. Something about bad boys... ...I agree with Shadow. Something about bad boys... :) <BR/><BR/>You know I love this installment. The slight nuances and tweaks really made a difference. <BR/><BR/>The cargo scene? I didn't breathe the entire way through. :)Momisodeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06752015177628948631noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-71039697392487653992008-09-11T09:50:00.000-05:002008-09-11T09:50:00.000-05:00Great chanpter! The 'scene' was very well done. ...Great chanpter! The 'scene' was very well done. I can't wait until next week.Expat No. 3699https://www.blogger.com/profile/13023652840187420920noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-70129528192627196122008-09-11T09:42:00.000-05:002008-09-11T09:42:00.000-05:00You have a very "Tell it like it is, say it like i...You have a very "Tell it like it is, say it like it's spoken" style which I am enjoying very much.<BR/>And I mean that. I'm really enjoying this.<BR/>I don't know if this means anything to you, but it's not something I say to just anyone. To me, it means the world:<BR/><BR/>You, my dear, are a writer.<BR/><BR/>And I will be reading.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-39516526036338430722008-09-11T09:19:00.000-05:002008-09-11T09:19:00.000-05:00Did I ever tell you I love Thursdays and anticipat...Did I ever tell you I love Thursdays and anticipating new chapters of "The Kid"? Well, I do. Anyway, I find myself wanting more and already looking forward to nest week. :-)Joyce-Annehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05833330034225455578noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-30119723283478880502008-09-11T07:42:00.000-05:002008-09-11T07:42:00.000-05:00Nice chapter Lou. I thought it was very well done...Nice chapter Lou. I thought it was very well done. The whole thing reminds me so much of radio when I was a little boy in the late '40's. You can hear the sound effects in your mind.moneythoughtshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08462893426608294171noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-64214087529737073052008-09-11T05:16:00.000-05:002008-09-11T05:16:00.000-05:00Juicy!Great work Lou....!GxxJuicy!<BR/><BR/>Great work Lou....!<BR/><BR/>G<BR/>xxMyst_72https://www.blogger.com/profile/01670435027908994101noreply@blogger.com