tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post1170114443927431431..comments2023-10-29T07:24:49.468-05:00Comments on LouCeeL: 100 Word Challenge - ForwardAnonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/13024392628362568010noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-48755160411643401722011-07-12T20:04:42.462-05:002011-07-12T20:04:42.462-05:00Very precise and compact. Well done!Very precise and compact. Well done!Velvet Verbosityhttp://www.velvetverbosity.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-80428181454202951112011-07-09T18:11:26.798-05:002011-07-09T18:11:26.798-05:00Love! I don't know why I've always been i...Love! I don't know why I've always been interested in the Civil War, but I am. So this was instantly a hit with me. I really like how this was written :)AuroraLeehttp://www.aurorascreativecorner.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-7249145355268680322011-07-09T08:17:03.996-05:002011-07-09T08:17:03.996-05:00Powerful! I really like this piece. If I could off...Powerful! I really like this piece. If I could offer one piece of critique (only because this is so nearly perfect), I found the "as he would say" distracting with respect to point-of-view. Seriously, this submission rocks.Franhttp://fghart.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-57679164088931253762011-07-08T23:19:44.820-05:002011-07-08T23:19:44.820-05:00And my guess is that he never did make it home - o...And my guess is that he never did make it home - or if he did, he would never be the same. Very evocative - thank you.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-22575859336485246662011-07-08T16:03:09.172-05:002011-07-08T16:03:09.172-05:00Really good. I liked this a lot. I could feel the...Really good. I liked this a lot. I could feel the itch and the heat.PattiKenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02894925987580502697noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-47769128332170626682011-07-08T09:31:10.555-05:002011-07-08T09:31:10.555-05:00what a miserable experience: sweat dripping, heat,...what a miserable experience: sweat dripping, heat, itchy clothes. And then you have to RUN and go kill people and try not to be killed.<br /><br />I love this period of American history, great piece<br /><br />visiting from 100 wordsCarriehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03472645003197467754noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-76706498412032572442011-07-07T18:54:38.621-05:002011-07-07T18:54:38.621-05:00I loved it!I loved it!knot2sharehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10295689942692807844noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-23333223016671672092011-07-07T10:25:08.174-05:002011-07-07T10:25:08.174-05:00Wonderful!!Wonderful!!Bhagyashreehttp://www.bbsearchingself.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-144610458949969802011-07-07T10:19:57.275-05:002011-07-07T10:19:57.275-05:00Well done! Memories of being on a C-141 headed fo...Well done! Memories of being on a C-141 headed for Panama came back to mind...Big Mark 243https://www.blogger.com/profile/10974573439218884164noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-20228238584851644542011-07-07T09:35:29.309-05:002011-07-07T09:35:29.309-05:00I hope his story being told means he survived the ...I hope his story being told means he survived the order.Grandmother Maryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/18169464484379536529noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5969775012135767870.post-50693523161224707992011-07-07T06:35:38.384-05:002011-07-07T06:35:38.384-05:00This piece was wonderful. You created a very inten...This piece was wonderful. You created a very intense scene.Tara R.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02993625193184914299noreply@blogger.com